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A Police Officer threatens a Shoplifter to "put it down!" Put down what exactly?

Filmed with a Canon MD101 and edited in Adobe Premiere. The lighting isn't the best, I only had one light because the other broke - urrgh.

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Last edited by Ratboy Productions (August 19, 2009 (05:09am))

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Re: Shoplifter Sketch

depressing sheesh! mini/blankexpression

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Stud Studios wrote:

depressing sheesh! mini/blankexpression

What do you mean? By what happens or the video it self?

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Re: Shoplifter Sketch

The only flaws I saw were the light flicker every once in a while. I also liked seeing that guy in the backround put on the hat.
Really good job.
@Stud Studios: Stop writing reviews about the story only. It's extremely annoying. Start saying stuff you liked about the animation, effects, etc.

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Re: Shoplifter Sketch

Ratboy Productions wrote:
Stud Studios wrote:

depressing sheesh! mini/blankexpression

What do you mean? By what happens or the video it self?

what happens. mini/blankexpression

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JKAnimation wrote:

@Stud Studios: Stop writing reviews about the story only. It's extremely annoying. Start saying stuff you liked about the animation, effects, etc.

well, sorry, I will. but the story is important too you know. mini/rolleyes

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Stud Studios wrote:
JKAnimation wrote:

@Stud Studios: Stop writing reviews about the story only. It's extremely annoying. Start saying stuff you liked about the animation, effects, etc.

well, sorry, I will. but the story is important too you know. mini/rolleyes

But what are you saying about the story to this film?

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Re: Shoplifter Sketch

Stud Studios wrote:
JKAnimation wrote:

@Stud Studios: Stop writing reviews about the story only. It's extremely annoying. Start saying stuff you liked about the animation, effects, etc.

well, sorry, I will. but the story is important too you know. mini/rolleyes

I didn't mean stop talking about the story, but stop talking about ONLY the story. It's not a good review to go "depressing sheesh".

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This has turned into a spamfest. Back on topic, the animation  was pretty good. I liked the story, probably because I have the same comedic type. The actual animation was good, and was better than your other films. The voice acting could have been better, just for the shoplifter because you could hear an echo, but other than that, great job!

Persist.

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okay, well, the problem I saw was in the begining with the walk cycle, try to make the arms swing less. mini/smile

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