Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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Hey guys! Could you please tell me your oppinion of my W.I.P movie's opening scene?
You can watch it in here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gs7u-64q … re=channel
The lego heads are a bit scratched up, sorry. they just are, but I like how they had a TV on in the begining. 
pretty good once the swearing and violence started, i would say the editing needs to be improved
the guys watching TV at start was too long before the shot of the TV and when murderous dude got out of car the walk to the door was too long, if you just had a shot of guy begining to walk and then cut straight to him at the door it may flow better, but hey i could be wrong
i have to say i really like the dark tone, which i feel brickfilms lack, loved the 2nd guy coughing on his own blood until eye shot, the brutality of murder was well captured
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