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Topic: Teh Game Shop

Hey, This is a film I've been working on for the past month. It's a weird story of 4 men and 1 kid trying to get COD......
This film was intended for Christmas! Oh and btw I know most of the voices are off sync with the animation, I know, I know, I know, I know, I know, I know. So yeah....

Please enjoy the film(hopefully).

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I hope you had a merry Christmas everybody and have a happy new year!

-Brain Wave

P.S This will be my last film with the 5K Huzzah mini/bigsmile

Last edited by Brain Wave (December 27, 2008 (03:35am))

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Re: Teh Game Shop

Well as some said
This is a good improovement of your films.
You've managed to make a 6 min film turn out good, not bad at all.
Your animation is decent but it doesn't really matches the voices all the time, watch that.
The script sounds decent but it was kinda badly filmed I think.
Like the shop scene with all the weirdos.
And see that you can get actors with good quality mics (gives Daragh Twomey EVIL look)
but for the rest I can see you put some effort in this film and I hope your next film will be great

-Darkman

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Re: Teh Game Shop

I agree on everything that Stijn said. A funny film.

My old YouTube is since long ago defunct - now even removed.
Here is my new one.

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Re: Teh Game Shop

I liked the censors.

_2014
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Re: Teh Game Shop

Nice Film Brain Wave, but as you said before, the dialoge was off sinc and that kind of stole the magic of it. The story was well plotted and the animation was alright. The cast was great ( I was in it ) but the random people in the shop confused me and and they could have had seperate voice actors for each of them. I see you have a lot of potenial, you just need to try harder.

-Daragh

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Re: Teh Game Shop

The old man said WHAT?!?!?! mini/lol

Nice film. The voices were a bit off track, but it was OK. The animation was great, funny story. 4/5

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Re: Teh Game Shop

Thanks for the comments guys!

Darkman wrote:

Your animation is decent but it doesn't really matches the voices all the time, watch that

Yes I know I screwed it up mini/tongue.

randomparrot wrote:

I liked the censors.

Why Thankyou mini/bigsmile. I enjoyed editing them in.

Daragh wrote:

The cast was great ( I was in it ) but the random people in the shop confused me and and they could have had seperate voice actors for each of them.

Agreed, I should of had different voice actors for the weirdos in the shop.

Thanks everyone,

-Brain Wave

Last edited by Brain Wave (December 27, 2008 (11:54am))

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