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Trouble at the Green grocer

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This is a short stopmotion film that I made one Monday. The violence is moderate in the movie, but you can see it with no problem. I found the sound effects at http://www.soundsnap.com

Hope you enjoyed it mini/wink

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The stop-motion was smooth, no lightflicker and the quality of the pictures are great. The only thing: next time, make a story. This isn't bad, but it doesn't have a point.

''You don't have to tell him how great is coffee is man!''

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Quite funny.

mini/cat

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Love random violence mini/smile

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Pros:
No light flicker
Smooth Animation

Cons:
No storyline
The sounds in the film was pretty obvious it was looped. Try to make the sound continuous, instead of having it sound like it coming again and again from far away when it's not.
Yellowish lighting: try to make the set's lighting look as natural as possible
The lady with the baby was not moving at all. Try to make it a little realistic. (running away from car, tending the baby, etc.

Good job and keep improving on some parts mini/bigsmile

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Thanks everybody that watched the video, and for the good coments and tips. mini/smile

Keep on bricki`n mini/tongue

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