Hm. Let's say it's art (I didn't understand it, so it must be;)), so I'll refrain from commenting on things like story, timing, voiceacting and so on.
As for the animation, I didn't see any. Animating is, imho (and according to the dictionary), the art of making inanimate objects seem alive. Although there was lots of movement, none of it seemed to be the result of the object's own desire or intent. The repeated appearance of your hand holding and moving objects didn't help.
What's left is a jaggedly moving, very colorful and desoriënting clip, that I found distracted from the music, instead of adding to it. But I'm sure there are people who'd enjoy it. [strike]Somewhere.[/strike] Sorry, that last comment was just mean.
-PG
Version 1 of the
the screenplay for episode 2 of
The Stunt is finishised, and I
really, really] await your
critique!