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Opportunity : THAC XVII
Definitely my weirdest video yet, but I'm happy nonetheless about getting it done in under 24 hours.
Last edited by Lord Ringozinglyzong (January 20, 2020 (01:05am))
Great job! I was a fan of the more absurd aspects.
Great job! I was a fan of the more absurd aspects.
Thanks! Those were the things I really wanted to nail in this entry, for the video to have that dreamlike feel.
Strange. (I seem to be saying that a lot this year. 
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The biggest issue I had was that, without the video description, I wouldn't have made the connection that the speech was real, then the next bit was a dream. It was simply confusing at first. Perhaps a shot of him leaving the speech place, going home, then crashing in bed would help clear that up.
The letter mod was a bit obnoxious.
I do like the story idea of his recognizing the opportunity to keep at his resolution and keep doing right.
Strange. (I seem to be saying that a lot this year.
The biggest issue I had was that, without the video description, I wouldn't have made the connection that the speech was real, then the next bit was a dream. It was simply confusing at first. Perhaps a shot of him leaving the speech place, going home, then crashing in bed would help clear that up.
The letter mod was a bit obnoxious.
I do like the story idea of his recognizing the opportunity to keep at his resolution and keep doing right.
Thanks! I didn’t even consider that criticism that you mentioned. The execution of the story was something that definitely wasn’t brilliant.
I’ll try to consider this in later videos too.
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