From an animation and cinematic standpoint, the movie is perfect. The only issue I had was with the scene when he turns against the Empire. The flashback scene was effective and showed his emotional struggle well. I feel as though we really didn't need to clarify his feelings to the audience by talking to himself. It is important to show his reasonings of betraying the Empire effectively, as it is a definitive character moment.

That aside, it was great, and I do look forward to part 2!

Last edited by William Osborne (July 28, 2017 (01:33am))

Great lighting and set design, and A LOT of very nice and pleasing cinematography, from the wide shots to the close ups, it was very well done. You also managed to pull off some very neat animation for the minifigures walking on smooth surfaces as well, so well done. I also really like the look on the soldiers' face when he had shot the man, I think that it was a very good fit. Now that it has been mentioned, I can see where William Osborne is coming from about the way you presented his feelings. Overall though, good work

I saw this on Youtube furst, but I decide to comment here as well. You did an outstanding job on this one. Keep it up.

The set design was my favorite part! I got excited just watching the final scene with those trees! So visually pleasing for me to see some really awesome sets! Animation was great as well. Looking forward to part 2!