Your animation is really good and you made a surprisingly good fight scene. I Also thought some of the camera moves were really good. Other than that  I would suggest working on your cinematography and storey telling. Also I think making your film wide screen would probably help it look more professional. But your animation is really good. Keep up the good work.

Hope that helps.
OsomStudios

Last edited by osomstudios (December 19, 2014 (08:35pm))

BTW when I suggested "Generic Batman Thing" that was a joke, not an actual suggestion.

The animation was good, light flicker was visible but kept to a minimum. Audio was not that good however. Voices were hard to hear, and some of the sound effects were just bizarre. There really wasn't much of a story to keep my interest, just Batman fighting people. Lighting was rather plain, would have liked to see some depth and texture to the light.

You don't improve your cinematography by getting more equipment, cinematography is the 'art' of film making, the way things look and feel. Keep on working at it, especially the story aspects.

I was a bit foolish to take the suggestion title seriously. As for the story, I was aware that the story was predict and unoriginal, and I shall plan and script a story the next time I do one. Even I found the voices hard to hear when I watched the video, but for the sound effects being bizarre, I don't know what you mean. I literally got out a crow bar and smashed things with it (and maybe broke something). I only possess one lamp, so I used the light from the ceiling.
I hope those clarified things and I thank everyone for the responses. I shall learn from my past mistakes and perfect things every single time I make a new video.

This is quite a fun film! I didn't listen with sound however.

Is thread bumping not aloud?

Thanks for telling me. At first I thought thread bumping was in a way a good thing.

^ This.

Also, bumping a thread is perfectly fine if it will bring renewed interest to the topic in question, especially if it would interest many people who may not have been on Bricks in Motion when the thread was first created.

For example, I'd never seen this video before, (or even knew it existed, for that matter) but have since seen it. And it wasn't half bad. I'm glad I've had a chance to watch it, now.

But as a rule, try not to bump old threads (especially your own), unless meaningful discussion can come from it.