Agree, Unknown, the choreography did look good!

One big thing I would suggest, especially with action sequences like this, is to use your minifigures' joints to their fullest potential. I noticed a lot of the movements here are pretty stiff (like when Mace falls down at the end he doesn't fall flat, he basically just tips over like a robot ). This is pretty easily remedied - just recreate the motions yourself and see how your appendages naturally move. Even slight movements will help a lot (the head turning to face the opponent instead of spinning with the torso, the opposite arm flying out with a lunge, etc.).