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The Remnant Trailer
The is the trailer for my upcoming series "The Remnant"!!
Feel free to criticize at will!
Sidenote; I re-uploaded this because I uploaded this while not logged I am not plagiarizing anyone!
Your camera is a lot steadier than it was, and the focus changes less often. Good to see you improving. Keep it up!
Your camera is a lot steadier than it was, and the focus changes less often. Good to see you improving. Keep it up!
Thanks 
This looks very interesting! I liked the two armies charging at each other, the cinematography was good there. The camera is definitely steadier, nice job on that.
The two most noticeable things here is the animation and light flicker. It looks like the light flicker is coming from your reflection on the background. Try to stay away from the set to avoid that and wear dark colors. If this doesn't solve you problem, try getting better lighting and change your camera settings to manual. As for the animation, just try taking more pictures and improve on your easing. You might also want to raise your frame rate.
But nonetheless, I look forward to seeing what you got!
LEGO Roman's are awesome.
This looks very interesting! I liked the two armies charging at each other, the cinematography was good there. The camera is definitely steadier, nice job on that.
The two most noticeable things here is the animation and light flicker. It looks like the light flicker is coming from your reflection on the background. Try to stay away from the set to avoid that and wear dark colors. If this doesn't solve you problem, try getting better lighting and change your camera settings to manual. As for the animation, just try taking more pictures and improve on your easing. You might also want to raise your frame rate.
But nonetheless, I look forward to seeing what you got!
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LEGO Roman's are awesome.
Thanks for the tips!
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