The soundscape is very nice, and gives it a more professional feel than many brickfilms. Did you get a sound designer, do it all yourself? Or just find sound effects? Because it's sounds real nice. The voice actor seemed good as well. I look forward to seeing the final product!
The animation though, seemed a little bit rough, which could be fixed by smoothing up your animation by using techniques like easing in and out. The framing could also have been shifted so that the object would be centered in the middle of the screen. There is also a lot of dead space with nothing in it. You could probably fix this by adding more objects, or zooming in the camera so that the (scanner?) will fit in most of the frame.
But all in all this looks pretty cool, and I look forward to seeing what you got.
Keep it up Choyce!
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