I think that this is a very good test! The cinematography and pacing are all pretty great - perfectly matching the quality that comes out of Hollywood films. The only things that looked under par with the rest of the film was the choppy-ness of the opening shot.

Lighting flicker was only really present in one or two shots, both of which were close ups. That leads me to believe that it may have been the fault of the camera, covering up the light in certain frames... This is something that could easily be avoided by pulling the camera back a bit, however, I wouldn't recommend this! The strongest point of the test was the camera angles, specifically the use of mainly medium and close ups. I think it made the brickfilm a bit more "personal," making the viewer seem a bit more attached to the characters, as now, they seem a bit larger than life.

Using pretty tight shots also gave a lot of contrast for the scene with the pull back, showing of the large wall. I'm not sure if that was your intention - to show off the space between and around the main characters, but, I certainly liked it!