Bricks in Motion
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Enjoy, constructive criticism is very welcome.
Its probably a bit fast, I may re-shoot a few shots.
Last edited by brickmationfilmscompany (January 16, 2015 (05:32pm))
The link doesn't work. 
Weird, I set it to unlisted and the link worked for me
Thanks rio, I changed the link. Tell me if it still wont work 
Yes, now the link works. And below is my review: 
It was very fast, I recommend that you take more frames to slow it down. The action was good, but I couldn't tell who was the bad guy, or really what was happening. The gun effects are really good, I like those. I especially like the camera movements you did. Keep up the good work!
Thanks man! I appreciate the feed back, part of the reason why it's so fast is cause when I uploaded it in 15 FPS it didn't play well on YouTube for some reason so I re-uploaded in 18
There were some random camera movements that cinfused the scene. Its not often i say this, but you might want less camera movement so we can track the action better.
There were some random camera movements that cinfused the scene. Its not often i say this, but you might want less camera movement so we can track the action better.
That's called Michael Bay Syndrome: where the camera moves so much that you can't comprehend what's supposed to be going on.
I take that as an insult
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