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A Fresh Start'N (THAC XII)

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Watch as our local hero tells you 'bout the fruits.

Made in Twenty Four Hours for THAC XII!

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"You know, cows are a lot like people. They're sinners!"

Perfect.

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That was really weird, but the technical aspects of it were good. I like the joke about the mod elements.

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I'm glad to have helped you with this one. It was hilarious.

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This was really great humour wise, it was very humorous. I thought all the voice actors were great in this as well. I will give this a "I really like it" out of 10.

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Really liked the animation and the wacky humour. You seem to have a habit of sneaking in really funny and witty lines if you pay close enough attention.

In terms of actual constructive criticism, I feel that sometimes your films can suffer slightly from a lack of structure, in a way. I get that this was meant to be a commercial kind of thing, and obviously for this the complaint is kind of moot because it was THAC, but the lack of an actual story arc makes the film seem more like a compilation of jokes than a story with clever jokes intertwined.

Still, a very minor complaint at that, congratulations on making this and I'm glad I could help.

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Thanks for all the comments, everybody!

I can definitely see where the lack of structure comes in. Being that the film is for THAC, I kindof felt like I needed to hit all the funniest/important beats without to much fluff in the middle. I'll definitely change that in films I'm going to make in the future, as I feel like telling a complete story should be one of my highest priorities

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Really funny. It's hard to find fault in something where any little flaw that might be present only serves to make it funnier. I was laughing the whole way through; nice job. mini/smile

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It's really funny, and your wacky animation style makes it more enjoyable.  If I have one criticism it doesn't really follow the theme of the contest except in name alone.  That being said, I'd love to see more from you!

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LASF wrote:

wat a terible leggo muvvie i men were r all teh gunz n sik vfx????

Gee, I don no.

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That was pretty bad.

-poor animation
-bad lighting
-VA'er delivery of lines was atrocious
-music choice was garbage

9/11 an amazing tragedy

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CarrollFilms wrote:

That was pretty bad.

-poor animation
-bad lighting
-VA'er delivery of lines was atrocious
-music choice was garbage

9/11 an amazing tragedy

Harsh...:P

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Ahaha, this one is a lot of fun. One of my favourites! You put together a hilarious script and the execution does it justice. I particularly liked the "come and get it" bit, that scream was perfect. I'm a fan of screams. I'm a fan of this.

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This is definitely one of my favorite interpretations of the theme.

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"DO YOU KNOW WHAT THEY DO TO CRABS AT KROGER?!"

That one had me laughing out loud, as did the rest of the film. Awesome job, Sonjira!

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I thought it was funny. Good comic timing, and I think the humor is a little more adventurous/creative than some of the "lolrandom" comedy stuff we see on this site at times.

Which reminds me of how I don't like the description "random" humor for these sorts of films. They're not random, they're usually very intentional choices by the creator of the film and the quality of those choices matters.

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I can understand where you're coming from with that description, Sméagol. I also think all the jokes still relate to the story being told, even if some of them seemed a bit unusual.

I have to say it was nice to get another brickfilm from you so soon considering you just released Birdman: Origins.

I don't know what I can really add that hasn't already been stated in the constructive criticism department. Just keep up the great work! mini/smile

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I love the reference to Kroger. That is one of my favorite parts of this. Kroger is really the main source of all my LEGO.