The practical laser bolts are nice, and similar to what I did many years ago, although they look odd compared to the enahnced lightsaber found later on. Thus, I'd stick with one style within a given work. (All enhanced in post, or none.)

Strangly, R2 head looks like a custom print/decal, which is really unnecessary at this point thanks to the billions of colors and heads floating around. The animation on that is understandably rough thanks to the uneven studs, so tiling the floor and going again would help a lot. Also, avoid green-screening if possible, especially if there are studs sticking up back there.

The lightsaber looks good, but it needs a half-out frame to help the illusion that it's truly turning on and not just appearing that way all of a sudden.

Overall, the opening titles need to be cut massively, and the animation is a bit rough around the edges, but it's workable, and with time a practice it can get even better.