Topic: Deadpool's guide to pick up women

Deadpool is up to no good again and the Punisher and the Human Torch fall prey to his...uhm...generosity?

Check it out here: Youtube

Re: Deadpool's guide to pick up women

The voice acting is as great as ever, particularly Johnny Storm mini/lol (in all honesty, I actually realise I could have done those lines a lot better)

Not too sure about the bluish tint, but the Human Torch flame effect rocked.

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Re: Deadpool's guide to pick up women

I had doubts myself, but it was between this and having flickering lights every couple of frames to simulate the club atmosphere. I found the flickering to be way too distracting so I went with the blue tint.

Re: Deadpool's guide to pick up women

I enjoyed this a lot. Animation and effects were very good. Dialogue was funny and the voice acting was strong. It probably could have benefited from some editing to tighten it up a bit.  I think you may be able to shave 35 - 50 seconds and not miss a beat.

As for the blue tint, I understand the choice but I'm not sure I'm on board. I think you're right in that flickering probably would not have worked - perhaps the 'club effect' could have been achieved through darker lighting?

Overall good job.

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