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Here is a short action film since I've never really ventured into that genre.

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The animation was smooth and cartoony and the sudden end was pretty funny mini/smile . The one thing that I found discracting was the sudden, large, almost random camera movements mini/dizzy .

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I loved it. The camera movements were perfect for the type of film you were looking for, and your sets were really good.

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It's different, I'll give it that.
The animation is good, and the wall-busting just kept getting more humorous as it went on.
The sets are nice, and the camera movements are well done, albeit very unconventional and random.

One thing I can never get right is the timing on free-hand camera movements, but you did a perfect job on this.
Did you storyboard the whole thing, or just make it up as you went?

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I like it, the camera movements are great. I guess you used a webcam for those. Camera movement can be tough, but you did it well. The part with the running was a bit strange and hard to focus on, but it worked anyway. The story was funny too, even though there was barely a story. mini/tongue

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Great job, I loved the zany camera movements, it gave the film a very unique style that I really enjoyed, although I can see how they may not be for everyone. Really stellar animation; we all know how hard hand to hand combat is to animate, and you did an amazing job, both with the animation itself and the choreography. Also, I loved the wall busting. Nice job. mini/smile

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Awesome - camera work is spot on.  Well done!  mini/sunnies


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This was pretty good. The slapstick nature of it, plus the cinematography gave an enjoyable feel to it. Camera movements were amazing.

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Thank-you for the feedback peoples! mini/bigsmile
@Pritchard Studios For this film, I was basically testing my animation skills and not really my story writing so I did pretty much make the thing up as I was going along!

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That was delightful.

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Nicely done, good job with the animation and camerawork. I liked the lighting in some of the shots (the overhead lighting of the subway platform in particular), though the white balancing was somewhat inconsistent.