Topic: Noir Sci-Fi Script
Last summer I shot some test footage of soldier fighting in some ruins, and since then I've been wanting to make a short film around it. I just finished scripting a story for it, and I was wondering if someone would be willing to give feedback on it.
Warning: This would be fairly spoilerly if you watch the finished product
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m6N
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