Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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Chocoholic
A ex Chocoholic tries to stay sober while his life comes crashing down.
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This was for BRAWL, but I didn't get to finish, cause I was super busy. So yeah... Enjoy! 
Oh and when it rendered it added like 30 seconds of darkness for some reason.
Well, this film has an interesting concept, and from what I can tell it was a mock-trailer, no?
Anyways, the camera movement and set bumps really get in the way of the story. They were really way too quick and jerky. Camera movement is nice, but if you have 14 different instances of it within a 5 second period then it just looks all jumbled up. So, in the future, keep your camera stationary and occasionally/sparingly, use camera movement.
The animation looks interesting, but it was really clouded by the set bumping and poor camera movement.
Story-wise, you had an interesting concept, it could have been fleshed out quite a bit more I think, as it felt very random and spontaneous.
Keep working on your animation, you are getting on the right track, so just keep on practicing!
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