Unlike Eurobricks, our spoiler tags don't hide pictures. So it ain't doing any good.
And the link box thing ain't lined up with the logo over of Youtube.

Now, great job. There wasn't any flicker or set bumps, and the animation is much improved.
It could be smoother, but it's still good. As for the pacing, you probably don't need a motion every word like at the end, as it makes the talker seem hyper-active, try every other word and it should be a bit more balanced.

The figures did get bumped a time or two, the camera angle was a bit too close to ground level, and I completely missed what I assumed was the punchline, but you're still improving a lot. Keep up the good work!

Hey Pritchard Studios,

Ha ha I noticed that! I thought it was just me yes it definitely isn't helping

ohhh I thought it was meant to be above I'll fix that up later today!

Are you able to help me out with this part? I'm a little confused by what you mean, but would like to know. Can you elaborate a bit more?

I thought so as well at the time, just because I created an archway for the entry and it wasn't seen, I'll fix that in the next video.

Ha ha may I ask what you thought the punchline was?

Thank you Pritchard Studios.

Hey SlothPaladin,
I apologize but I am also confused with your term, or your feedback are you able to tell me in a different manner?

Do you mean when he goes back to how he was with his hands down in neautral position? And do you mean keeping his hands always moving or away from the neautral zone?
If you can give me some more info that'd be great. As I am not really familiar with what you guy's mean by motion, and emphasizing.

But thank you for your feedback Pritchard Studios and SlothPaladin.

Sincerely,
Divine.

Hey SlothPaladin,

Thanks for getting back to me, I understand now what you are trying to say and what you were referring to when you were speaking about emphasizing.

So just to clarify, if the phase were; ''What were you THINKING!'' when you say -what- is the question of the sentence are you refering to having the hand slightly raised for the speech of ''What were you...''? And then raising the two arms for ''THINKING''. I apologize for any confusion but getting the right answer will really allow me to understand exactly what you are referring too and confirming it.

And do you recommend less motion of character movement? I am also just a little puzzled, if the hands should not go to neutral position what should their position be when his speech is done?

I will definitely take note of what you've mentioned on my next film and give it a go. Just quite frankly I thought if you don't continue to put motion it would look unnatural or choppy but I will take in what you've said and attempt it on my next film.

Sincerely,
Divine.