It looks great!
It did have a few mis-steps, but it was still well put together, informative, and fun.
You could have interviewed some more big names in brickfilming such as Fallentomato/NightlyNewsandNine, Our own dear, wonderful Smeagol, Mobiledeli, Ect...But again, I'm sure you wanted to keep things more concise. That being said, while I've seen his work, what made you choose to interview Bricktease? Nothing against him for sure, and please don't take this the wrong way, but it seems if you could only pick two that you'd go with a much bigger name for the second person.
Anyway, I like how you did the interviews in Lego, since you couldn't in person. The mouth animation is well done, but the basic set and lack of animation could have seen some improvement. And it was nice to see that you looked hard enough to see that the Magic Portal wasn't the first brickfilm ever. You did miss some things, (Lego Studios, a bit of detail on BF.com/BiM, and brickfilming pre-Youtube) but you did a good job on what you did hit, and I wish you the best of grades on this project. I'm sure it'll do well.
Also, the letter for Lego was a great touch, I'm glad you waited on an answer about that.