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Topic: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

Hey guys, been ages since I animated, but without prevail, I did 2 little clips yesterday, and today, Heart of the Guardian which a small part of it is done, is for a short film I'd like to make, I'd like to also thank Tobias for his voice, thats in this scene.
Heart of the Guardian: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlfsGoTPVI4



Lotr: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XezwqSxph4U
The other one, is of Lord of the rings, anyone familiar with the fellowship of the ring, near the ending, were its Boromir and Aragon, well thats what I attempted to remake, I know that now, I needed more photos, I had that in mind, as I was going along, but I didn't have a lot of time on my hands, so it may be a little choppy, I hope you enjoy either way.

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

any comments/critique?

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

Dude, please don't double post, and you've only left it like 7 hours. If nobody posts, I'm afraid you may have to let the thread die. Happens to the best of us all the time.

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

And the reason for my second post, was I was wanting to get some feedback, guess we can't have it all.

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

This is a friendly site, but we do have some rules to make sure the forums don't get clogged up or unruly. I used to get picked up on them all the time. I still do every now and the.

I watched the first clip (can't watch both, I'm in a class right now) and the animation seems okay, but you need to work on build your sets. It looks unfinished, and what is there is basically just the Mirkwood Army set's wall, which makes this look like it's a LotR film

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

yea nah your exactly right that makes sense, and to be honest, I didn't know the second post was posted to soon to be honest, anyhow, thanks for your feedback, and yea I do agree with you on that, I have a lot of lego pieces, its just there all different colored and none of the colors I'd like me to be not enough of it anyhow, I will be working on proper sets as soon I get sets, it will be much more better, can't wait for that moment to be honest..

but will work on it, and yea haha they are to be honest, there the only elves I could use at this time, and wanted to get onto it, thanks anyhow will work on it mate, this was more a test for coming back into animation its good to be back!

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

Anyone critiques?

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

The first one, don't bump the table/camera/set, turn up the sound, vary the shots, work on your set and get a background.

The second, same as the first except even without the choppiness there is too little... anything.
The figures just wiggle back and forth mostly. Vary the angles of the shots.

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Re: 2 WIP/TESTS Lord of the rings scene, and Heart of the Guardian scene

Thanks nemo appreciate the feedback, will work on it.

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