Topic: Lego battle of Hürtgen
Lego battle of Hürtgen
Allies launched an offensive in Hürtgen, would be achieved to save her from the domino German?
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Lego battle of Hürtgen
Allies launched an offensive in Hürtgen, would be achieved to save her from the domino German?
Allies launched an offensive in Hürtgen, would be achieved to save her from the domino German?
Huh?
jahnocli, from the credits in the movie it's evidedent that English is not Jonhy's native language, I believe he is trying to say more along the lines of:
"The Allied launched an offensive in Hürtgen, can they achieve saving her [her referring to the city] from the oppressive Germans?"
Anyway, Jonhy, not too bad. Your animation could use some work, easing in and easing out, and the frame rate and walk cycle, but that will come in time.
The effects aren't bad, but work on your animation before you put overused muzzle flashes and dust into your movies, but they're pretty good.
It was a bit weird that there was no music playing until the very end, where it is obviously supposed to give it and epic and heroic feel to it, but maybe some sort of music in the rest would have been better.
My biggest complaint with this is the picture you used for the film. Don't plagiarize others' work and use it to make people want to watch your videos, that will only annoy people when it's not what they expected.
Overall, it could use a lot of work but it's all stuff you just need to practice. When I was first starting out, I had been animating probably for a year or so, my films looked a lot like yours, actually.
If you're interested, here's one of my films at that time:
http://www.bricksinmotion.com/films/view/4211
Here's my most current film:
http://www.bricksinmotion.com/films/view/5139
Basically, just practice.
Have fun and good luck!
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