It was alright, but you should really edit at a higher framerate. FPS of anything under 15 is really no good, and yours looks about 10 or 11 (sorry if that's a bit blunt).

Also, I'd be careful about using thumbnail images if they aren't your own...the thumbnail doesn't match up to your footage. Just sayin'.

Try not to show the top of your set if it's open, either. It makes the set look half-built.

Hope this helps!

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