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Lego City Stories: The Camping Trip
This is my first brickfilm. It has no violence or anything bad in it, so it is for all ages! I also put some funny things through out the video. Thanks for Watching!
Wow, the campgrounds are right down the road from their house. That's convenient!
In all seriousness, the voice acting, sound design, and animation all need some work. The sets were OK, but if I were you, I'd focus more on raising your frame rate and improving on your animation. Do keep trying, and I know you'll get the hang of it. 
Wow, the campgrounds are right down the road from their house. That's convenient!
In all seriousness, the voice acting, sound design, and animation all need some work. The sets were OK, but if I were you, I'd focus more on raising your frame rate and improving on your animation. Do keep trying, and I know you'll get the hang of it.
Thank you for commenting! I understand everything you said and it can only get better!:) Since I got this one done I can tell where I need improvement. Frame rate was my first thought just to make it smooth. This one is at 15 fps, next one I was tthinking 24 fps? What would you recommend? And with voices and everything else, you'll see an improvement in my next one. Writing is in progress now.
Thanks again!
I had a good amount of views. Does anyone else have any good pointers to help me? Thanks!
Well, as you said...
with voices...you'll see an improvement in my next one
But, what I wanna know is if you're going to do all the voices yourself or hire other forum-members to do the voices for you. I suggest the second option; it would work much better than if you played all the characters in your film yourself. However, it's your film...
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