• Joined: May 26, 2011

Topic: Space Test

I'm working on my video for the 50th anniversary of Doctor Who. Towards the end of the video, a massive space battle occurs. The opening shot of said battle is this: http://www.flickr.com/photos/the2awesom … 617695634/

I think it looks great, my viewers think it looks great, but I need a 3rd pair of eyes. What do you think, and how could I improve it? mini/smile

Thanks!

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Re: Space Test

Is this for a Doctor Who animation?

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Re: Space Test

jampot wrote:

Is this for a Doctor Who animation?

the2awesomeguys wrote:

I'm working on my video for the 50th anniversary of Doctor Who.

So, yes.

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Re: Space Test

It's obviously a still background that's been heavily compressed, and the smaller Dalek ships are spinning WAY WAY too quickly. The star destroyer-like ships don't hardly move, and the angle goes from straight on to being above the other ships. That ending angle is the dreaded 'not quite straight on, but not quite above' angle that just doesn't look that great.

Also, the crash zoom just doesn't seem to fit, even though it's done well.

Sorry, hate to be so picky, but that's just my two cents plain and simple.

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