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Super Short - Romantic Beach Scene

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A romantic walk on the beach goes terribly wrong.

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Haha. mini/lol

I loved the lighting; the sun was great.  I liked the way you animated the water, too.

Spoiler (click to read)

The shark's mouth

movements could have been done a bit better though, I think.  Overall though, nice job on a funny short!

Retribution (3rd place in BRAWL 2015)

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That was pretty good! I agree with what FM said, but that was nicely animated overall!

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?

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The water animation is fabulous.

You've done a much better water jump than I have.

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Very well done, the water must have taken forever, sheesh. Funny and well animated, not much more to ask for. mini/smile

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Thanks guys! The idea came from a couple other shorts I had that were mashed together. As a Floridian I also really enjoy sunsets on the beach!

However, I am bothered by one little thing.

A Youtube commenter asked if the short was inspired by Crazy Ed's Unsuccessful Date. Now that I see it I am a little worried! I wonder if it appears as if I've stolen his idea.

Is there anything I should do? mini/blankexpression

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