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Hi there, I see you're new. Try reading up on bbcode (it's not that much) so you can make your links look a lot prettier. Giving information and not just a link in the thread (some back story or whatever) is generally also valued.

Anyway my opinion. To start off, there were a couple of spelling mistakes (running not runing for instance). Secondly, it looked pretty cool. It was a bit choppy at parts. Did you use an even frame rate all the time (15 is used pretty much always)? Something that also might help is getting a tripod and setting your cameras's setting on manual. It avoids light flicker and the slight change of focus. Furthermore, when walking and running try also moving the arms. It gives a realistic effect and looks way better!