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1 Topic by PushOverProductions February 3, 2013 (07:09pm)

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Topic: What can I do to make this better?

I am working on a brickfilm about a guy who goes shopping for his wife at this crazy store with crazy people, as his homicidal dog stalks him, and I animated this little clip (with out sound effects) and put it here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7azyzfy5lyY

looking back at it, I don't think I like it. the camera jumps at one point and the lighting is pretty bad, should I re-animate it? If so, what should I do better and how?

no more brickfilming *sad face*.

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2 Reply by GHB February 3, 2013 (08:37pm)

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Re: What can I do to make this better?

If your satisfied with it, keep it. If your not, re-do it. It's clear that your not very satisfied with it. That's all I have to say.

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3 Reply by jediknight1997 February 3, 2013 (09:36pm)

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Re: What can I do to make this better?

I was confused on the walk cycle. It seems as though he just skipped across the sidewalk.

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4 Reply by backyardlegos February 3, 2013 (11:00pm)

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Re: What can I do to make this better?

I would say slightly re-do your set so the path turns at a right angle instead of being on a diagonal, and then re-shoot it using a proper walk cycle. I liked the rest of it though, the cartoony style of the dog was nice.