I'm not sure why this didn't receive more attention. The length of the piece shows that you have put a ton of effort into it, and you'd think SOMEONE would have commented by now...
Ah well. I love how this begins like a cheesy sitcom, but then just gets more random and random and random until by the end one stops and wonders "How on earth did the film get to this point?!?" The length and pace means that the things gradually begins spiralling into madness, rather than shorter films that have to fling all they've got at you within a limited space of time.
THIS NEEDS MORE ATTENTION!! NOW!!