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I can see what you're saying about the webbing and I was wondering about it for a while, but you can't do much with a lego hand cause they can't close around anything lol. I was thinking about having him hold the official lego webbing, but that would have been a huge hassle to animate, also I don't think it'd look as great if I edited it on later. I might try it though, lemme know if I should.
The colours work pretty well IMO, just bump up the contrast during post-production. I really like the DoF of this shot, but I would angle the camera down a bit, as there is a lot of space above his head (but then again, that may be very deliberate, in which case, discount that last remark).
The character is right in the center of the shot. Now, if he is very angry, or has some sort of strong emotion, or if you want to put a lot of emphasis, then this is a good thing, but if not, I encourage you to get a bit more creative with framing (while still keeping the emphasis on the character, of course); change the angle up a bit, or put him off to one side, or both. 
I know it needs work
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I know it needs work
YOU NEVER COME BACK HERE EVER AND I DON'T RIKE YOU AUSTRALIAN AND ALL YOU AUSTRALIAN ROOK ARIKE!
I don't know what that was about, but like you said, the images aren't the best. I spotted a few small glares.
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I think that's supposed to be what the character is saying in that frame....Not that it makes any difference.
@KT, normally, people don't post any lines with the frames. And background on the frame, a little explanation of what's in it, or even info on the film is encouraged.
@Noobster, with the exception of pointing the camera down a bit, it's perfect! I can't wait to see it.
@Filmyguy, yeah, I'm late to the party, but here's my two cents anyway: Try the Lego rope/webbing.
Since Lego hands can't grip a smaller web, that's the only way to make it look like he's actually holding onto something.
That, and CGI webbing don't look right to me, it looks like someone let a 5-year old kid paint white lines in the frames.
Yes, it'll be hard to animate, but I think the results will turn out much better in the end. That being said, the rest of the frame is fantastic!
There is only one problem.... You said a 30 second trailer, and that's fine. But that better be for a longer movie. 
Here's a shot from my new 30-sec Spidey trailer. It's coming together.
Tell me what you think, please!
This is crazy! CRAZY I TELL YOU! Insanely awesome frame Filmyguy! 
Another shot from Caden Hawke and the Staff of Kauket.
And no, the torch isn't meant to be lit.
I'm quite pleased with the film so far, even if I am filming it back-to-front. The odds have really been stacked against me with this one, but it's all coming along nicely.
I find the green tint to be very odd, and think it would look much better being solid black.
Since you said over in the Sets/props thread that that's all in post, so it shouldn't be too hard to fix.
The camera should probably be tilted down a bit so the top of the building isn't showing, because as it is, it looks weird. Yes, it's got the pointy thing on top, but it really, truly looks like you didn't have the bricks to build it up any further, and forgot to hide the top of the set out of shot.
And lastly, the set is great, but so out of focus that we can't see any of the cool details. For that matter, everything is out of focus except the figures. And with their backs in shadows, the only details that can be made out are some of their hair, and a little part of the one guy's face. (That isn't even totally in focus.) Unless you plan on the focus shifting in shot to the staff thing, you may want to at least have something else nice and clear. Perhaps you could bump it a notch or two father away and still somewhat have the guys while also having the benches/near wall in focus.
Anyway, the set is sweet, but some camera issues hide or distract from that awesomeness. Fix those (And the green tint) and it'll be great.
I find the green tint to be very odd, and think it would look much better being solid black.
Since you said over in the Sets/props thread that that's all in post, so it shouldn't be too hard to fix.
The camera should probably be tilted down a bit so the top of the building isn't showing, because as it is, it looks weird. Yes, it's got the pointy thing on top, but it really, truly looks like you didn't have the bricks to build it up any further, and forgot to hide the top of the set out of shot.And lastly, the set is great, but so out of focus that we can't see any of the cool details. For that matter, everything is out of focus except the figures. And with their backs in shadows, the only details that can be made out are some of their hair, and a little part of the one guy's face. (That isn't even totally in focus.) Unless you plan on the focus shifting in shot to the staff thing, you may want to at least have something else nice and clear. Perhaps you could bump it a notch or two father away and still somewhat have the guys while also having the benches/near wall in focus.
Anyway, the set is sweet, but some camera issues hide or distract from that awesomeness. Fix those (And the green tint) and it'll be great.
Well, it's blurred because you're not supposed to be able to see it yet. The idea is that we don't actually get to see the staff until we get right up to it, because it's going to be a long-ish scene, and I want to keep the air of mystery about it, if that makes any sense.
And I know what you're saying about the green, but again, story element. The green's important. It may not look great in a still frame, but the green light isn't stationery in the final shot.
New frame from the film I'm working on, BULB.
Likey?
Awesome. 
It looks almost exactly like a Tube Station (London Underground subway system for anyone who doesn't know). Love the spooky lighting and the oncoming train.
Just curious though, why is there the hole in the roof?
Awesome.
Just curious though, why is there the hole in the roof?
Yes, it is the London Underground!
The hole in the roof is actually meant to be the lighting for the station, but it looks slightly weird from that angle.
Yes.
I see you have started with Live Action films.
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