Topic: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

Hey everyone, I started to make a entry for BRAWL but it wasn't coming out how I envisioned it in my head. Here is the footage I animated for it. I tried some new things, including a dolly shot. My rig needs some work though to make the push in smoother.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2GQik7kh … e=youtu.be

Re: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

Shame you didn't finished this. It's great.

Re: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

The cinematography is pretty decent in this one and I really like the ambience. Too bad you didn't finish this.

Re: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

I have to agree with Ed, but I'd like to add that in the final few scenes you had a touch of flicker and set bumps. It was minor, but just enough to be noticeable. Otherwise great job man! Shame you didn't finish it. I'm curious though, what was going to happen in the course of the film?

Re: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

Thanks for the feedback. And yeah, there were some minor flaws throughout and the light flicker was probably due to filming during the morning. The film was going to be a somewhat Allegorical tale of a man in a cave. I won't say much more though in case I do end up using the story in the future.

Re: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

WOW! This is awesome, I think you could slap one more shot on the end and call it 'finished' for now.

But seriously turn this into a bigger film, when that grey guy appeared I was literally scared..

Re: Cave (an unfinished BRAWL Entry)

Thanks for your feedback, mobiledeli! I'm glad you like it, I probably will finish it sometime.