Finally getting around to doing a full "Misconception" film?
If so, could you please keep it clean? Thanks.
On to the frame itself, the lighting doesn't seem right. There's that one light source, which casts long, odd looking shadows and then has only the one spot on the far right where the bookshelf is lit well. And then the tablet that is glowing but not lighting up the girl's face at all.
The room looks very plain and empty with just the one piece of furniture, I'd suggest at least adding a small table beside it. The objects on the floor seem out-of-place. If the person is slop enough to leave those on the floor, then there would be more things lying around, but if she is neat-freak enough to totally clean the rest of the floor, then why did she leave those there? If you want to kill two birds with one stone, you should add a table and set the items on it.