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Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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The animation is a little bit choppy. You should increase your frame-rate to (at least) 12 fps if it isn't already. Also, the cardboard background isn't very pleasing to the eye. You should use maybe use blue paper or something. Other than that though, the end made me laugh. Just keep working on it and you'll improve. 
I would also like to add that there were some set bumps, - Try taping down your set, and invest in a tripod if you don't have one already. (If you have a webcam try building a little LEGO cradle to put it in.) Focus was a little flickery, - put all your settings to manual on your camera. And I see that you have miniature minfigs in the background. I would suggest making it focus more on the character, and have the audience blurred a bit. To make it seem farther away. Or just use normal-sized minifigures. Overall the video was pretty decent, the ending made me chuckle. 
Hope this helped.
3/5
Edit: Forgot to add, like LASF said, the animation was choppy. I think you need to ease in and out more, and bump your framerate up. Watch this tutorial by FancyPants about easing in and out.
Last edited by PlainBrickProductions (July 25, 2012 (10:16pm))
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