Topic: Iron Man Test - Landing

I am in the pre-production stages of a Marvel Avengers fight, and I filmed this test as a rough 'teaser' for it.  I am mainly looking for constructive criticism by posting it here.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsSoKQgH … ature=plcp

(I have already corrected the issue with the figure being in focus and the sparks/debree out of focus)

Thanks in advance!

Re: Iron Man Test - Landing

Not bad, not bad at all!
Although when he lands, the arms should swing back a little and then return to where they were. As they are, they swing back some, and then suddenly stop. Then when he leans back up, it looks like he leans too far backwards, although that could just be the angle.

Other than those little nit-picks, it was great, can't wait to see more!

Re: Iron Man Test - Landing

It would be nice to see the environment interact. Maybe the plants would quiver from impact?

Re: Iron Man Test - Landing

Great, thanks for the advice!  I'll be sure to incorporate both of those, that feedback will help me with future animations along with this one mini/smile

Re: Iron Man Test - Landing

I thought was very good and the effects were great mini/wink

http://i49.tinypic.com/2qk0akp.png