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Gorilla & Company Films

I haven't animated anything in over 3 months. I am sorry about that, but I have been working on my magnum opus: Ghost Cat: Port of Call New Orleans

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You have a good animation, but unfortunately you also have a lot of light flickers... mini/sad

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   -Music: 7.5/10
   -Cinematography: 4/10
   -Animation: 6.5/10
   -Sets: 4/10
   -Effects: 5/10 

   
→OVERALL: 6/10

*The Overall rating as nothing to do with the other categories... It's just my overall appreciation of your film.

Re: Gorilla & Company Films Animation Reel

LoïcFb wrote:

You have a good animation, but unfortunately you also have a lot of light flickers...
   ____________
 
   -Music: 7.5/10
   -Cinematography: 4/10
   -Animation: 6.5/10
   -Sets: 4/10
   -Effects: 5/10 
   
→OVERALL: 6/10
*The Overall rating as nothing to do with the other categories... It's just my overall appreciation of your film.

Thanks for the rating! Constructive criticism helps a lot. What am I missing, as for set design? I am aware of the light flicker, and am hard at work trying to destroy it.

Last edited by SpaceGorilla (May 2, 2012 (05:29pm))

Gorilla & Company Films

I haven't animated anything in over 3 months. I am sorry about that, but I have been working on my magnum opus: Ghost Cat: Port of Call New Orleans

youtube  tumblr  sunglasses & scissors

Re: Gorilla & Company Films Animation Reel

The sets at 0:15 and 0:22 seconds were well-made...

But I didn't really liked the sets at 0:43 mini/tongue

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Loïc F-B wrote:

The sets at 0:15 and 0:22 seconds were well-made...

But I didn't really liked the sets at 0:43 mini/tongue

I agree. The one at 0:43 was from "Karl's Korner", that's from a year ago.

Do you have any suggestions as to how I could improve my set design? I would really appreciate it.

Gorilla & Company Films

I haven't animated anything in over 3 months. I am sorry about that, but I have been working on my magnum opus: Ghost Cat: Port of Call New Orleans

youtube  tumblr  sunglasses & scissors

Re: Gorilla & Company Films Animation Reel

SpaceGorilla wrote:

Do you have any suggestions as to how I could improve my set design? I would really appreciate it.

Every (brick)film is unique, you know... mini/tongue

But here are some great tutorials that will help you with your set design:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iNAUPfO4HNI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YzHLelrci9g
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=noiBZJfmPCE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jNyA0OWu0mk

Last edited by Loïc F-B (May 3, 2012 (04:53pm))