Topic: Deadpool interactive adventure intro

An interactive adventure, with choices on the way. LINK: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WvktIJDE8NY (This is the first full animation I've made in roughly 2 years, just so you know)

Re: Deadpool interactive adventure intro

I like the concept of interactive adventures, they can be really good if they are done well. Your intro has some ups and downs I would say.

I really liked how you utilized the iron man character in the animation. I applaud you for being able to animate something other than LEGO. Also, the concept and the humor in this is pretty good, so well done.

There are a few things that need some work though. The voice acting was pretty engaging, but the microphone quality and background noise kind of ruined it in my opinion. Perhaps something like a rock band microphone with a piece of fabric over it could help. Also, the animation was alright, but it was hard to focus on the characters with the large amount of light flicker that you had in the film. To help avoid this, I would not use natural light at all. Black out all of your windows and use lamps to light your set. Also, try to get a camera (if you can) that has all manual settings so that you can have control over the light. Lastly, I would try to improve with the sets for any future films; the set in the intro was quite basic and boring.

I congratulate you for coming back into the swing of things brickfilming wise, and I look forward to seeing some of your work in the future!

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Re: Deadpool interactive adventure intro

Yeah, not too bad so far, but at about 27 seconds in, are those your hands in the background? That might be a problem. mini/lol

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