Topic: The Break Up
The Break Up
The heart aches of breaking up in Shrambo City.
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The Break Up
The heart aches of breaking up in Shrambo City.
I liked this film a lot! The story intensified as did the music which kept me thoroughly entertained. The voice acting was convincing, and I had no idea that that was how it was going to end. There were a few issues such as the animation, the set building, and the camera bumps. To fix the animation, I would recommend raising your frame rate to 12 or 15 fps. As for the set, I would recommend adding some props such as lamps, couches, and cabinets. Lastly, to fix your camera wobble, I would advise getting a camera that is compatible with a remote, or a webcam that connects to your computer. Overall, I was pleasantly surprised! 3/5
Nice work for you Antonio, much better than your some oldies. I like the music so so much! And the voice acting is great. Mhh, I love your mike and ideas.
I liked this film a lot! The story intensified as did the music which kept me thoroughly entertained. The voice acting was convincing, and I had no idea that that was how it was going to end. There were a few issues such as the animation, the set building, and the camera bumps. To fix the animation, I would recommend raising your frame rate to 12 or 15 fps. As for the set, I would recommend adding some props such as lamps, couches, and cabinets. Lastly, to fix your camera wobble, I would advise getting a camera that is compatible with a remote, or a webcam that connects to your computer. Overall, I was pleasantly surprised! 3/5
Thanks I am glad you got all that because that is how I wanted this short to come across.
Nice work for you Antonio, much better than your some oldies. I like the music so so much! And the voice acting is great. Mhh, I love your mike and ideas.
Many thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Yup. I believe, 'cause you have to do many brickfilms. I see it. 
I enjoyed this short a lot. Wasn't expecting that at the end lol. 
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