That was a funny short, but it was nearly destructed with the slow, choppy animation. What framerate are you using? You should definitely raise to 15 FPS or above. Because of the framerate I'm guessing you don't have a framerate software, but never fear Monkeyjam is here! It is availible to all PC users, and is entirely free, and doesn't take up much space on your computer, a thorough tutorial can be found here. Anyways the set was decent, the part where the guy gets run over would look good at a higher FPS, and the story was pretty funny for a short film. Good luck on future films!

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