Topic: Trailer - In The Trenches

In The Trenches

Trench Warfare

I recently purchased the Microsoft Lifecam HD and tested it creating a small WW1 trench warfare video. I am now producing a full video with complete audio, Im hoping what your thoughts are?

Re: Trailer - In The Trenches

Try to make more attention at your focus. Then your movie will be much better.

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Re: Trailer - In The Trenches

I didn't like the scenery, and a little bit light flicking... maybe I'll stop criticizeing. You're a beginner...

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Re: Trailer - In The Trenches

Okay, so this was somewhat confusing to me. I didn't really know who/what to pay attention to, and it was paced pretty fast. The animation is not that good, and while it wasn't terrible, there are definitely some areas where it could be improved. The trenches and other sets aren't that well made, and I advise that you use something other than a black sheet as the background. The camera quality wasn't that good either, as many people were out of focus and it bumped often (You shouldn't really touch the camera when filming). Also, the lighting was poor, and there was flicker and inconsistency in the shots.

Also, this isn't a trailer, it's a test (As it says on your upload on YouTube). This should go in the WIPs and Tests sub-forum.

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