this wasn't really very good, sir. There's barely, if any animation here at all, so essentially it's two and a half minutes worth of text. When making trailers, be sure you have something to actually show off, if not, just don't make a trailer. And always keep them short and to the point. cut away any and all you can. What this 1:22 clip told me, you could have said in under 10 seconds, and in a much more fun and interesting way. I'm not trying to be mean, just learn from what I say for next time. Keep at it.