Hey mister, if someone in two hours doesn't post on your thread, there's no need to start being impatient. Wait at least one day before bumping your own threads.
What do you expect us to say? Right now, all I can tell you is that it is way out of focus, and I couldn't tell what was going on there, not sure if because of the focus, the cinematography or the animation, which was average, but it looks like you already found out all these problems. You already know what you have to improve.
(btw, I'm sorry if I sound rude in the first part of the post, it's not my intention)