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The second episode in my Sci-Fi series about four solders who are trapped behind enemy lines. Note: This is a sequel if you have not seen the first episode this probably wont make much sense, click here to watch the first episode: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=grwad8dXOnA
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The starting animation was really slow and I didnt like the effects, but the sets were great!

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There was some really good animation in there.

The pace of the film was bit slow, keep that in mind for your next episode.

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Thank you I will.

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Oh yes. The sotry continues. FPS is just really soft, really really! And animation are good. And I like your camera a little bit, but the quality was weird in sometimes. But anyway, great film.

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thank you

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It was hard to tell witch Caricatures where talking when.
If you are using Audacity (according to your first video you are)
Go under effect and change the pitch so it sounds like your voice is lower.
I liked this otherwise

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Great job. The set are look really good. The music is great. Animation looks really nice. The story seems to be at a slower pace and for an action type story I think it would better with a faster pace. Also all the voices sound the same and it is hard to keep track of characters. Other then that great job.

4/5

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I'll keep that in mind thank you.