Topic: Done Deal
Done Deal
The story of a young assassin trying to keep his job by carrying out a simple job.
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Done Deal
The story of a young assassin trying to keep his job by carrying out a simple job.
I think you should work on your animation some, it's a little choppy. At the beginning I had a hard time understanding what the guy was saying because of the scene changes (thunder and rain noises, etc.). Also, your effects look like they need a little work, and I could probably give you some tips if I knew what program you're using. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
So...? what do you think?
You could improve the quality of the film by lowering the pace.
Other than that: nice job!
I think this is very good action film! Good job.
I used after effects cs5, so if hyou have any tips for that it would be nice. And to explain the fast paced begining, i was trying to show the assassing guy getting ready up on the rood and show the guys in the building getting ready (like they knew it was coming). As for the voice at the begining it was suppost to set up a little bit of back story, and i added an echo to make it sound like it was in the assassins head and he was remembering it. Anyways thanks for the feeback.
Hey, one thing left. I want that you should make longer movie than that. Example Done Deal 2, if you can. Because I liked a lot. 
Yei! 
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