Brick7 wrote:No bad at all! Personally, I think it would sound best if it ended at around 2:09. That section was particulary pretty to me and sounded like a conclusion. I would also prefer if the organ background was changed to strings (violins particularly). Have you ever attended a live symphony? It is wonderful to actually see which/how many instruments are used at varying times to achieve varying moods (if you are not part of an orchestra already). You might find it very inspiring. You have some real talent, and I look forward to enjoying more pieces from you.
yeah I think I might make some adjustments to the ending still i just haven't gotten around to it. I'm confused because there is no organ part at all... do you mean the Cellos? (that's the first part you hear) I can see how that kind of sounds like and organ... I have been to some concerts before and the most recent one I went to was especially nice, though now that i'm interested in writing music I should go to some more Thanks for the advice and encouragement!
Tobias wrote:That's actually really good!! You think you could compose some for me? I really love it! I feel like downloading it to my iPod
I would like to be able to compose for people when I get good enough but I'm not quite there yet thanks so much though!
Edit: Would anybody like to suggest a name for this song? currently it is "song 2" which isn't a very interesting name...
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