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Topic: The Red River Flows - Preview/Test

THE RED RIVER FLOWS - PREVIEW/TEST ONE

Hi,
I just uploaded the Preview Clip from my film "The Red River Flows." Please excuse the horrible quality and darkness, but I want some feedback on my animation.

I want to know if my animation is smooth, and where I can improve within the clip.

Feedback greatly needed -

Thanks,
Matt

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Re: The Red River Flows - Preview/Test

I didn't really think the music fit the scene, it made the clip seem more like a slide show than a "scary scene."

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Re: The Red River Flows - Preview/Test

There was not that much animation to comment on...
The "flashes" were a bit short to actually judge the animation but the were too long to be actual flashes.
I really like the idea of seeing through the mask. You might want to make the see-through area a tad bigger...

Edit: if you're going for suspense, take a look at "gunship down" from fancypants for inspiration.

Last edited by boardron (August 2, 2011 (10:58pm))

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