It's okay, I guess, but I thought the motivation of your main character was unclear. Was he expecting his pants to fall down, perhaps as some sort of elaborate prank? If it was a prank, where did it go from there? Or perhaps he wasn't expecting his pants to fall? I think perhaps this might have been the intended direction, as the character was staring absentmindedly off into space, which I thought was a nice touch. Also, the brevity of the film also suggests this was the intended direction, as does the music which is usually performed during a single trick — here it indicates a whole event. But... hold on, that would indicate he was expecting his pants to fall. I suppose his lack of surprise, or perhaps his look of overwhelming confidence (which I first interpreted as "staring absentmindedly off into space") suggests too that he was in fact expecting his pants to fall. Perhaps you meant it to be interpreted either way, which is an interesting approach. However, I choose to believe that the character lowered his pants on purpose. This represents a much deeper character than if his pants were just to fall of their own accord. The character who lowers his pants on purpose comes across as a self-righteous prankster, who is not afraid to deviate from the norm and lower his pants in public, perhaps in a rebellious manner. It also shows that he is not very self-concious as far as showing off his body is concerned. If the character were, in fact, not expecting his pants to fall down, there is nothing to be extrapolated about his character, except perhaps he is semi-unaware of his surroundings.]

I gave it 4/5 because what's the plot?A guy's trouser's fall down? Improve it a little bit.The greatest brickfilm is the magic portal AND lego-the force unleashed.Improve it.

cooldynamyteproductions wrote:

I gave it 4/5 because what's the plot?A guy's trouser's fall down? Improve it a little bit.The greatest brickfilm is the magic portal AND lego-the force unleashed.Improve it.

This.

Seriously ...

-Rob