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Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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Did you bump it like this on purpose?
Okay, you bumped it on purpose, I'll give you a review 
. I really liked the timing, and how the blood effects went on, but red clay isn't always the most professional, if you know what I mean . The story was pretty pointless, but made SOME sense. Sounds like you're recording your voice with Windows Movie Maker, if you aren't please correct me 
. Anyways, my point was, was that I couldn't understand anything, except I heard some cries, and I heard someone say, "Pizza." If you're using Windows Movie Maker to record, please download audacity, where you can take out background noise, and amplify your voice. For a quick tutorial, visit this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W6LGEUxsc2A the video description also gives instructions on where, and how to download audacity. Now onto the ratings:
Story 3
Animation 3
Cinematography 4
Effects 5
Sound 1
Overall 3
All Ratings out of 10
.Okay, you bumped it on purpose, I'll give you a review
Story 3
Animation 3
Cinematography 4
Effects 5
Sound 1
Overall 3
All Ratings out of 10
Ye Ive been uploading vids from 2008 that absouloutly suck and WMM is rubbish and I did download Audicity
but dont know how to use it.
Elfskater98 wrote:
Did you bump it like this on purpose?
What does bump it mean?
LarryStudios wrote:Elfskater98 wrote:
Did you bump it like this on purpose?
What does bump it mean?
Oh I didnt know that did any thing O_o
There was a large amount of camera bumps, light flicker, set shaking, choppy animation. There's lots to improve, try using lamps instead of natural lighting, also take the camera off auto-focus and use manual, tape down your set and camera so it doesn't move. Also I didn't quite understand what happened, work on your storytelling.
1.5/5
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