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Here is a clip from a WIP called "The Clone Newbie"
Watch here on Brickshelf or on Vimeo here!
Last edited by LASF (July 8, 2011 (06:15pm))
It just looks like another plain ol' LEGO Star Wars movie. Has this genre not already been done to death?
It's gonna be different, Hazzat.
That's what they all say.
...NO: Star wars is NOT dead! Who told you that?
He means that there are so many LEGO Star Wars movies out there that it's not worth it to make them or watch them anymore (I think, it's kinda hard to explain the idiom "done to death".).
He didn't mean that Star Wars is dead.
Has this genre not already been done to death?
If an idea is "done to death", it means that the idea was some animal, it would've been used for work so much it would have died. "Died" could mean that something isn't used anymore, but that expression uses it the other way around.
By that, he meant that there are so many Star Wars films out there.
He's basically saying that Star Wars has been done way too many times.
Last edited by minifig051 (July 9, 2011 (04:40pm))
What you have so far isn't very good. The camera quality, set bumps and lighting were the worst thing there, and the voice acting needed work, because it sounds like a 11 year old not even trying to sound like a Clone (which is probably the case). The animation wasn't something to go home and tell mom about either. It was very bland and the minifigure didn't move very much. And from what it looks like so far, it seems like the story is just going to be the same thing that millions of other YouTube n00bs have done a bajillion times. Why don't you think of your own creative story instead of doing something that's been done so many times before? I'm sure people would like that a whole lot more.
-JK
Last edited by Just Kidden (July 10, 2011 (03:35pm))
This does not look very impressive. Story wise, or technical wise. What everyone else said explains it well.
I think I've put this aside for a bit of reasons:
One: I am entering a contest
Two: All the negative feedback
And also this is a WIP and IS NOT a final. And so many of you think this idea is unoriginal so I'll NOT do it 
PS:
The contest is the "Earthquake" contest
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