I hope this dosent sound to stereotyped.....NOTE: I havn't really written any of the script yet.

Jack Burke, a middle aged adventurer, was not all that smart when he was a small boy. His friends would tease him about not having enough smarts to stay in school. Now Jack, must go on the adventure of his lifetime. Not just to search for the Gems Of Intelligene but to unlock a part of him he has never known.

What do you think? Any critiques?